Trust

Tears rise and my breathing stops.
Revealing answers to hidden questions,
Understanding forms like dewdrops.
Stay still, he might yet hangup,
Telling secrets long untold.

Katerina Marks
18 Feb 2015

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4 thoughts on “Trust

  1. I like your rhyming. The last line does seem to be disconnected; perhaps the period in line 4. Is the caller telling you secrets you want to hear? Maybe adding “he” to the first part of the last line would help. Hope these suggestions help. I did like the poem.

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